Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Many people wonder about {tooltip}advertisement{end-link}Advertisements or advertising. This needs to be a plural noun or a verb{end-tooltip}. Some people think that it has negative impact in our life. However, {tooltip}others said it has been playing as{end-link}others say it has a{end-tooltip} positive effect on this world. {tooltip}This is not an easy essay to be answered, but I will look at this issue.{end-link}You should not include this sentence in your essay{end-tooltip}.

{tooltip}Why advertisement has been playing a negative effect in our life{end-link}Try not to ask questions in your essay{end-tooltip}? Of Course for several reasons: firstly, it motivates the psychological point in everyone, especially women. They will run to buy this advertised product especially if it’s from {tooltip}cosmetic roof{end-link}what do you mean?{end-tooltip}, just to show their beauty to men, which will lead to more {tooltip}offender and raped{end-link}offenders and rape{end-tooltip} cases. Secondly, you can sit comfortably with your family and suddenly the telephone is ringing, but it’s nothing important, it’s just another company {tooltip}try{end-link}trying{end-tooltip} to convince you to buy one of their products. It is a real {tooltip}intrusive example of advertisement{end-link}example of intrusive advertisement{end-tooltip}. Lastly, sometimes you do not have the financial ability to buy something, but with these new methods of advertisement, you {tooltip}will{end-link}might{end-tooltip} run to buy it, which {tooltip}will{end-link}could{end-tooltip} affect your budget.

On the other hand, there are some good sides to advertising. For instance, it compares the prices of many companies which {tooltip}benefit{end-link}benefits{end-tooltip} the consumer. Besides, it really {tooltip}opens our vision to{end-link}gives us a chance to{end-tooltip} see more products which we {tooltip}do not knowit{end-link}would not have known about{end-tooltip} unless the TV or Radio advertised them. {tooltip}In addition to{end-link}In addition{end-tooltip}, it breaks our daily routine and allows us to see new faces and learn the language better with the help of the daily updates they deliver through {tooltip}advertisement{end-link}advertising{end-tooltip}.

In conclusion, as we can see there are many aspects to this {tooltip}essay{end-link}argument{end-tooltip}. I feel that we gain no benefits at all from advertisement, it plays {tooltip}on minds of people {end-link}with people's minds to make them{end-tooltip} buy more things that they do not need it at all.

Your arguments are good and the paragraphs are set out well, however, you must be careful about making assertive statements, e.g. ‘ it motivates the psychological point in everyone’. How do you know that all advertisements do motivate every single person, for instance? Overall, this is a good essay, well done.

Source: ielts-blog.com

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